I wrote this when I was sixteen or so, and back then my short stories were around a page or two. I was learning the craft, I guess.
It's not the length or the astounding talent (ha) that will get you...it's the content.
Read and be amazed. I know I was. I really was:
They looked
at the small baby cradled in her arms.
When he
frowned, you could see the dimples that both his young mother and father had.
His eyes
were brown, like his father’s, his hair blond, like his mother’s.
A few
freckles dotted his nose. Neither of the parents had freckles, but the father’s
kid brother had them – millions of them.
His nose was
shaped exactly like his father’s, but his face was beautifully oval and smooth,
like his mother’s.
It seemed as
if each of the parent’s best qualities had been put together and molded into
this child.
He was
beautiful.
The young
parents looked at each other and smiled.
No one would
ever know he had been adopted.
See what I mean?
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